Write Effective Blog Posts Using Hollywood Screenwriting Principles

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Posted on 16th June 2011 by Hal Licino in internet |Uncategorized

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Three decades ago a Hollywood screenwriter named Syd Field published a book explaining his “paradigm”–a firm and effective classic three part story structure that riffs on the framework first formalized in Aristotle’s Poetics and forms the basis for virtually every modern movie from Silence Of The Lambs to Avatar.

The storytelling geometry of the Syd Field Paradigm not only applies to motion pictures, but also can form the basis for powerful and compelling blog posts that will captivate and motivate your readers.

Whatever the subject of your blog post, applying the Syd Field Paradigm means that your reader is taken on an alluring journey consisting of a crescendo of anticipation leading to a satisfying conclusion.

In this post, I explain how to create effective freelance blog posts using this principle.

Act I: The Inciting Incident

The Syd Field Paradigm not only breaks down storytelling to the conventional theatrical three-act format, but goes far beyond in describing the actual dynamics of portraying an effective story. Act I is the setup. It traditionally takes up the first quarter of the story where the inciting incident occurs.

In blogging, this is where you not only introduce your topic, but also focus on the incitement. Confronting your readers in order to incite them requires a controversial or unexpected turn right at the beginning, which establishes your blog as fresh and challenging.

Structuring an incitement in the setup section communicates to the reader that this is not going to be the standard dry blog post, but that you are presenting an unique take on the topic. You are posing a question that you will answer in the climax at the end of Act III.

Act II: Confrontation

Act II is rising action that takes up fully half of your entire word length. This is where you provide additional information to bolster your question and provide credibility. Be sure to do so in a fresh and edgy manner.

Syd Field calls this the confrontation. It is the section where the blogger confronts the issue while building an increasing sense of awareness in the readers as to how the topic impacts them.

Just like when the protagonist of a screenplay confronts his personal challenges in Act II (with the aid of mentors and co-protagonists), the Syd Field blogger brings in authoritative and referenced information to substantiate and confront your Act I question. The movie protagonist gains an increased sense of awareness of their identity and their previously unfathomable capabilities in Act II. The blog reader must be led to a similar epiphany. They must learn new aspects about the subject in a way that personally relates to their own lives, activities, and preferences.

Act III: Climax & Resolution

The climax is where the main question and all of the sub-questions that were raised in the first two acts are resolved in an intense and dramatic manner. An example of this is when the Jake Sully-led Na’vi turn the tide against the mighty military machines of the invaders from Earth in the movie Avatar. This is the time when your readers are literally at “the edge of their seats.” All the loose ends of your blog post are tied together here in a kinetic and spirited manner that leaves the reader with a renewed perspective on the topic and how it affects them.

Why Blog This Way?

By integrating a cinematic progression into your blog posts, your reader is taken on a journey of discovery in a manner specifically designed to appeal, enthrall and entertain. A Syd Field type blog post excels because of the following factors:

  • Dwell Time. When your reader is led through the progress of a story, they are less likely to click away halfway through.
  • Trajectory. You are able to guide the reader through facts and thus influence them in any direction you prefer.
  • Motivation. The story structure gets your reader involved and is thus more susceptible to your advocacy cause or call to action.
  • Reputation. When you write consistently in a structured matter, that fact alone differentiates you from your unstructured and less-skilled competitors.
  • Repeat Traffic. Your audience is left more fulfilled. You’ll see a greater percentage of return readers due to your style alone.

There are countless advantages to structuring your blog post along the guidelines set forth by the Syd Field Paradigm. A considerable percentage of online writing can be termed as blobs rather than blogs due to their lack of internal structure and sequence.

Formless writing may have become commonplace, but it is still disconcerting to the reader and conveys shallowness and lack of substance. Apply the Syd Field Paradigm concepts to your own writing and graduate to the upper echelons of blogdom!

Your Turn

Have you used this style, or a similar style, on your freelancing blog posts? Share the blogging style that you prefer and explain why you prefer it in the comments.

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Responsive Web Design – The Book

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Posted on 7th June 2011 by Jeffrey Zeldman in internet |Uncategorized

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SOME IDEAS SEEM inevitable once they arrive. It’s impossible for me to conceive of the universe before rock and roll or to envision Christmas without Mr Dickens’s Carol, and it’s as tough for my kid to picture life before iPads. So too will the internet users and designers who come after us find it hard to believe we once served web content in boxy little hardwired layouts left over from the magical but inflexible world of print.

I remember when the change came. We were putting on An Event Apart, our design conference for people who make websites, and half the speakers at our 2009 Seattle show had tumbled to the magic of media queries. One after another, CSS wizards including Eric Meyer and Dan Cederholm presented the beginnings of an approach to designing content for a world where people were just as likely to be using smart, small-screen devices like iPhone and Android as they were traditional desktop browsers.

Toward the end of the second day, Ethan Marcotte took what the other speakers had shared and amped it to 11. Suddenly, we had moved from maybe to for sure, from possible to inevitable. Ethan even gave us a name for his new approach to web design.

That name appears on the cover of this book, and this book represents the culmination of two years of design research and application by Ethan and leading-edge design practitioners around the world. Armed with this brief book, you will have everything you need to re-imagine your web design universe and boldly go where none have gone before. Happy reading and designing!

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Good Web content examples and what makes them work

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Posted on 7th June 2011 by Walter in internet |Uncategorized

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Web content can make or break a website – no matter how good the design is. Most designers know this from first-hand experience.

So it wasn’t surprising when WDD visitors who read How to spot and avoid web copy that kills websites demanded a follow-up showcasing good web content.

Whether you or your clients write content for your websites, or you partner with content writers (aka web writers, copywriters, SEO copywriters, etc.), the content needs to attract visitors, engage them, and ultimately entice them to take desired actions. Only then do you truly attain a winning website.

Here are good web content examples, and what makes them work.

Mailchimp

The folks at Mailchimp get right down to ‘monkey business’ with a clear explanation of what they offer: Easy Email Newsletters. No “Best-in-class automated information distribution system technology” rubbish here.

They get to the point, saying more with less. It fits with their mantra of making things easy. Headline, short and descriptive intro, ‘sign up free’ button and a cute chimp graphic – done.

They carry the straight talk throughout the inner pages. For instance, the ‘Forever Free Plan’ on the pricing page notes: Store up to 2,000 subscribers. Send up to 12,000 emails per month. No expiring trials. No contracts. No credit card required. Pretty clear. No confusing jargon or legal babble.

Lesson learned:
The Mailchimp crew went out of their way to organize information in a user-friendly manner to help visitors locate and process what they need quickly and easily. Web copywriters, designers and developers – not visitors – should do the heavy lifting, i.e. clearly defining and arranging key tasks and messages. These chimps deserve a banana break.


37 Signals

37 Signals offers popular “frustration-free” collaboration and productivity tools to freelancers and small businesses, and they keep their web content straightforward, too.

When visitors arrive to a site, they want to know if they’re at the right place. 37 Signals helps people determine that immediately by noting who can benefit from their solutions (designers, consultants, manufacturers, etc.). And they nicely segment their offerings and provide descriptive teasers for each tool, setting expectations on what to expect beyond each link.

For example, when you mouse over the Basecamp button, the text reads: Are you still managing projects with email? Are you still using Excel for your to-do lists? It’s time to upgrade to Basecamp. Manage projects and collaborate with your team and clients the modern way. They demonstrate they understand you and your pain, and offer a better way to work.

In addition to handy screenshots, 37 Signals provides third-party endorsements of its awesomeness through a seal that states, “Trusted by millions of people in over 30 countries,” along with a series of succinct, relevant testimonials. Providing ‘social evidence’ is an effective way to gain credibility and trust on the Web because people naturally take comfort in going with the masses.

Lesson learned:
Words brand your business, for better or worse. Take a page from 37 Signals; their content is kept simple, practical and friendly, which is consistent with their apps. They’re not just stating they provide frustration-free experiences, they’re demonstrating it.


Groupon

Like ‘em or hate ‘em, Groupon is deploying character to differentiate itself and stay ahead of the crowded deal-of-the-day market. Injecting color and humor into its ads makes Groupon a distinctive corporate persona that’s alluring to many people and fostering customer loyalty. The following examples prove ‘dull’ isn’t a part of their vocabulary.

Like German shepherds, human bodies demand treats before they’ll sit quietly for piano recitals or chase off nut-stealing squirrels. Reward an obedient exterior with today’s Groupon…

In today’s workplace, sleeveless, bicep-broadcasting business suits are a common sight, and deal-closing golf games are eschewed in favour of sweat-slicked cage matches. Get in shape to vault over the corporate ladder with today’s Groupon…

Tea has been used since ancient times to fight illness, overcoffeed caffeine rushes, and the letter U. Pay homage to leaves’ most prolific progeny with today’s Groupon…

As long as the writers remember they’re writing for the audience, not for their egos, the entertainment value could continue to make it exciting to watch for and review new promos. It makes the competitors appear pretty lame, and will likely help prolong Groupon’s shelf life.

Lesson learned:
Web content can conceive a personality, set a tone and create expectations. Does everyone in your newest client’s industry sound the same? They could take a chance like Groupon, shake things up, and arouse the market. Maybe you could, too.


Turning web content challenges into wins

Having written web content about everything from used construction equipment to medical diagnostics software for clients worldwide, our copywriters at Webcopyplus are able to serve up behind-the-scenes insights surrounding some recently completed projects.

1-800-GOT-JUNK: Key messages and keywords

Rapidly growing with 200-plus franchise partners in the US, Canada and Australia, this marketing-savvy company needed simple, accessible content that highlighted key points: they provide fast, convenient and professional service, and they’re environmentally responsible. So related messaging was woven throughout the site’s main pages.

Also, to promote organic presence on search engines, descriptive keywords were tactfully integrated throughout the content. Here’s an example of keyword-rich content at work: Got old furniture, appliances, electronics, tires, construction debris, or yard waste you need to make disappear? 1-800-GOT-JUNK? can take away almost any material we can fit in our trucks, without you ever lifting a finger.

Choosing and using the right keywords pays off. Google terms like old furniture removal or junk removal, and you’ll likely see their site appear at or near the top of search results.


Uniserve: Cleaning up for visitors

Over the years, this Canadian telecom company accumulated three websites with contributions from several stakeholders, resulting in different and conflicting styles and messages. After fleshing out and prioritizing products and services, and defining key differentiators with design partner Beyond Media, content was revamped from top to bottom. In fact, 400-plus pages on three sites were streamlined down to one 80-page website.

To covey key messages clearly and provide visitors an effortless online experience, great care was taken to remove every word possible. Uninspired, long-winded messages were replaced with succinct, upbeat points. Following is some example banner content.


UBC: Catering to Visitors

When University of British Columbia’s (UBC) Conferences and Accommodations enlisted the services of an SEO firm, their traffic increased, but their bounce rate went through the roof. The problem: programmers merely keyword stuffed their content, with little or no regard for visitors.

While keywords remained an important part of the equation, descriptive content was carefully crafted to help reveal distinct qualities of each conference venue and accommodation option, in addition to the benefits of working with UBC’s knowledgeable staff. The enhanced content, created in partnership with Creative Engine, allows visitors to quickly and easily determine which product will suit their needs best, and helps overcome concerns (i.e. access to a kitchenette and high-speed Internet), which has lead to increased bookings.


Every word counts

Never forget that every word on a website can influence a visitor’s buying decision and loyalty. For example, a rewrite that removed words like “nasty spam” from a landing page’s fine print helped promotional gift company SwagLove improve its conversion rate by 385% (1.9% versus 8.9%). Content should eliminate roadblocks, not create them.

Carefully review the words on the websites you design. Are they helping or hurting your clients? Like good design, good content can clearly tell visitors how they’ll benefit from a product or service, provide guidance, and make it easy for them to take action. Quality content keeps website visitors – and your clients – happy, and coming back for more.


Written exclusively for WDD by Rick Sloboda. He is a Web Copywriter at Webcopyplus, which helps designers and businesses increase online traffic and sales with optimized web content. He speaks frequently at Web-related forums and seminars, including MarketingProfs and Editors’ Association of Canada, and conducts website content studies with organizations in Europe and the U.S., including Yale University. You can follow him on Twitter @Webcopyplus.

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Building Strategies for Written Website Content

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Posted on 1st June 2011 by Jake Rocheleau in internet |Uncategorized

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When you sit down initially to write out webpage content it may feel ultimately boring and a trivial task. But from a broader perspective you should understand just how powerful your writing will become. Each of your visitors interested in the content you write will spend at least a few seconds drilling through your pages. Often times even a couple minutes or hours over a few repeat visits.

It’s important to spend some time strategizing a successful plan for your content. Not only in grammar and presentation, but SEO also plays a huge role. Even as a webmaster or standard blogger your words may be read by millions of people via the Internet. It’s a big world out there, but luckily there are some techniques you can use to create brilliant content.

Plan a Hierarchy

It’s not too often you’ll find the time to sit down and write through pages and pages digitally. Editing becomes quite the chore after even a few hours time. Thus if you can try designing a page hierarchy which your website will follow the planning process moves a lot smoother.

This may be hand-drawn on paper or even created in digital art software such as Photoshop or Fireworks. The purpose is to build a brief collection of root pages and sub-pages each set with their own descriptions. The quickest way to accomplish this may also be in bulleted-list form.

As an example I’ve included a very crude mockup below. The bulleted list includes a few core pages with some highlights for how to design each sub-page. The great thing about building this on a digital platform is how quickly changes can be applied.

  • About – Company overview of who founded the corporation, when, and where. What are our missions? what can we do to help the customer in any way? Why should they work with us over any competition?
  • Services – How do we complete projects? do we use any special software, or tools? And if so what qualifications do we hold? Split page into segments for easy skimming and include proper labels.
    • Website Design services – Adobe photoshop mockups with sub-pages. offer discounts: only $10 extra for each sub-page.
    • Web Development services – Mention programming languages and completion time. charges will vary depending on language. Basic HTML/CSS pages offered overnight. If database is required only support MySQL.
    • Icon Design – Fireworks and Illustrator capable. Client will be sent a vector file and PSD file if Photoshop was utilized. All layers are kept in-tact and can be re-sized.
  • Contact – Provide information such as e-mail and telephone. If possible include photo of self and employees. Also be sure to write up a brief paragraph about best contact scenario and how quickly we can respond. Contact form required!

Share and Critique your Copy

It’s often very difficult to take up writing. This is especially true to many native web designers who are accustomed in using Adobe Photoshop as their work station. In order to ease the stress a bit consider sharing your project with a friend or colleague.

When working in a team you are able to split content into segments and share out responsibility. This will make planning strategies much easier where “two heads are better than one”, as the old saying goes. You’ll also be able to review each-other’s writing and check for mistakes or possible changes.

As a design firm or larger company it’s possible to get a few people working in a writing team. This provides a huge advantage since you’ll have more than 2 sets of eyes darting over your digital copy. When presenting yourself online your clients will hold you to higher ideals in writing and proper grammar.

Google Optimizations

It’s impossible to ignore the big brother of search engines when it comes to content writing. In fact, many would argue becoming quickly indexed in Google is one of the most important aspects to building a website!

To get in cozy with Google SERPS you should outline important pieces in your content. Break down headings into H1-H4 or deeper if needed. Google will take these semantics heavily into consideration when scanning your pages for keywords or phrases. Also consider using bold and italics every once in a while to seclude important words.

Link building should also be a top priority within your content. If you have pages from a blog or another website consider applying hyperlinks into your text. Google is always interested in quality backlinks and it proves your website is able to reference credible sources. Link text is also penetrated deeply by Google’s web bots, so pick your wording carefully!

Granted these effects are not solely based on Google alone. Yahoo! and Bing also apply a similar set of rules for scanning documents. But they often adopt similar ideologies from Google, and thus optimization for Google is optimization for all.

Scan the Web for Inspiration

Depending on the type of business you’re in it may be required to check out a few examples online. For freelance web designers it isn’t too difficult locating a couple firms and scouring through their writing.

For similar businesses it’s as easy as a couple Google queries. When you can build a small catalog of websites it makes writing your page content a lot easier. You may even construct a brief plan or model as mentioned earlier based on a few well-to-do companies. Of course it’s not a good idea to blatantly copy writing word-for-word, so keep your written text unique and loosely based on a set theme.

Other companies may also provide ideas for imagery and content placement. How your pages are laid out present a very unique situation to each of your visitors. Scrolling through pages for your content dramatically reduces the odds your visitors will stick around to read it. Ensure both your page layout and navigation are simple yet efficient to portray your website’s message.

Conclusion

These tips should garner a bit of attention from writers and web copy designers alike. Digital writing has become the next wave of careers for many freelancers. If you aren’t so good with words you may consider bulking up your confidence in writing and layout technique.

It may be more comfortable hiring an outside source to write for you. This is also okay, just so long as everybody is on the same page and you can feel proud of the final product. For even more tips I suggest our creating compelling web copy article with examples. Also feel free to interact with the design community and ask plenty of questions!

4 Tips For Producting Quality Content

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Posted on 26th May 2011 by tdomf_e01d5 in internet |Uncategorized

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How to Become a Freelance Travel Writer

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Posted on 25th May 2011 by Annabelle Frost in internet |Uncategorized

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Freelance travel writing is as exciting a career as it is glamorous. If you love visiting new places and interacting with people from different cultures then this is a great career choice for you.

Of course, a flair for descriptive writing is an important prerequisite too. A combination of these two factors gives you the perfect temperament for successful travel writing.

But this is not all you need. There are some other skills for you to develop too if you want to taste success in this line of work.

Only when you have the right skill sets and knowledge can you commit yourself to a career of travel writing.

Skills You Will Need

There are several skills you will need both as writer and traveler to ensure your success in your career of travel writing. The first and most important one is the ability to write descriptively and make it interesting for the reader.

  • The ability to paint a word picture. A travel writer should be able to create a ‘word picture’ about a destination through their article. To do this, it is necessary to keenly observe and analyze what you see during your travels. You should be descriptive yet factual so that the reader gets an accurate idea about the travel location. Your article should convey the essence of a place to the future traveler so that they know exactly what to expect when they get there. The purpose of your travel article may be to simply share your traveling experience or to encourage people to visit a specific location. In either case, your article influences the reader’s opinion about the destination. This is why it is very important to ensure that your article is informative, helpful and factual.
  • The skill to make your article distinct and special. Intense competition is one of the biggest challenges faced by a travel writer. There are scores of travel writers posting articles from around the world. Someone else may have already written about your destination no matter how exotic or ‘off the beaten track’ it is. When you write about the same location, ensure that your content is not repetitive. Look for something special about the place that has been overlooked by others. Adding your insights or personal experiences is a good way to make your content original and unique. Use a direct and friendly approach to really connect with your reader. Then read, edit and review your article to ensure top-notch quality.
  • The judgment to exploit available opportunities. As a travel writer, your article is the means to showcase your talents. Adopt a comprehensive view to expand your opportunities. Experiment with different styles keeping in mind the profile of your prospective audience. Different travel destinations draw different kinds of visitors. For instance, an article describing Disneyland needs to be targeted toward parents with children. But an article about a romantic French mountain retreat must have quite a different ‘flavor.’ Accordingly, you can vary your style to showcase your abilities to the maximum. Optimize this window of opportunity to demonstrate your professionalism, creativity, writing skill and command of the language.

Getting Published

For a beginner, travel writing is an uphill task that yields little reward. But once you have established yourself and gained a reputation for excellent copy, the situation is bound to change. To pave the way for success, it is important to develop a bond with the publishers and editors of different magazines even during the initial stages. You should demonstrate your ability to write according to their style guidelines and within deadlines. Once you have proven yourself in this way, you gain their trust. This forms the foundation of the lucrative writer–publisher relationship that will evolve in your future.

Understanding and conforming to the specifications of various publishers is also of great importance. This includes the length of the articles, tone and approach to be used. Ensure that every piece you submit meets all these criteria without fail.

The absence of a regular monthly paycheck for the freelance travel writer makes the financial aspect very significant. Be prepared to bear your own expenses while going on a ‘business’ trip as there is no employer to reimburse them. Most magazines/travel sites will pay you only after your article is published and only some will accept unsolicited articles.

Honing Your Skills

Travel writing courses are conducted by some educational institutions to hone your skills and prepare you for the market. Do your homework before signing up for any course because not all of them are as good as they claim. A general rule of the thumb is to disbelieve claims that seem too good to be true. Sign up for a course that a friend or fellow travel writer has undergone and that they recommend. Browse the internet for information about a course to know the general opinion about its quality before you enroll.

Your Turn

Are you already a freelance travel writer?

Share some of your tips and experiences in the comments.

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Wordsmith Or Writer?

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Posted on 17th May 2011 by FreelanceSwitch.com in internet |Uncategorized

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One of my clients, for whom I regularly ghostwrite newsletter and trade journal articles, often drafts material and then sends it to me with a request “for a little wordsmithing.” Fortunately, he has learned that what he is really asking for is a writing consultation. Over the years, I have become his trusted ghostwriting resource (See From Temporary Help To “Trusted Ghostwriter” ) and I have acquired that status largely by going beyond “wordsmithing.”

Mechanical Fixes

Like many clients, when he first started working with me, he thought in terms of “fixing” and “improving” the fine points of his drafts, working at the word level of the material. He wanted me to:

  • Fix grammatical problems or particularly striking style problems.
  • Suggest a better word or phrase here and there, where he was groping for the right expression.
  • Recommend edits to reduce the word count to what was needed for a particular publication, or for his newsletter.
  • “Punch it up” a bit, which he thought of as using sexier words for the mundane language he started out with.

It is rather like someone bringing their car into the auto mechanic’s. The car already exists, but it is not quite right. The mechanic’s job is to identify what’s wrong and fix it. Or more accurately, the mechanic recommends repairs, and implements those that the customer approves.

Similarly, at the very least, the ghostwriter can suggest better wording, or added transitions, or cuts to the copy to improve its impact or fit the available space. These are basic services a skilled writer should be able to deliver, and they are often the starting point for a working relationship with a new client.

And make no mistake, these are valuable services. But there is no reason to stop there.

A Designer’s Perspective

Imagine that you take your car into the shop and complain that you skid a lot in winter driving conditions. The mechanic might look at your tires and discover that they are very worn. Or you might get a suggestion that you buy a different kind of tire, one especially designed to provide traction on snow and ice.

You probably would not get a recommendation that the mechanic should somehow change the car from two-wheel drive to all-wheel drive. Your auto mechanic does not redesign your vehicle for you.

But a ghostwriter can go beyond fixing or tweaking the client’s message to redesigning the message. When you consult on communication or content design, you might:

  • Recommend covering the main points in the piece in a different order. As a professional communicator, you can often see how a different sequence of topics could make the overall message stronger.
  • Identify content that should be left out, not from a space perspective, but from an impact perspective. Many clients will include details that obscure their messages, or even bring up points that work against their own messages. The writer’s job is to take the reader’s point of view and identify elements that strengthen or weaken the impact of the piece.
  • Suggest a coherent framework for the content. This could be an analogy that works throughout the article, or a series of questions and answers, or a repeated theme that holds things together.

Unlike the auto mechanic, writers work in a medium where rearranging the construction of the piece and adding and removing elements is both feasible and desirable.

The Relationship Challenge

The main hazard associated with making design recommendations is that it is easy for some writers to forget how the relationship works. When you are ghostwriting business communications, the content is still the client’s, and the client makes all the final decisions.

That means applying some diplomacy when making design-level recommendations. The stakes are a little higher than with mechanical fixes, and some patience in educating the client can make all the difference.

Some writers have a hard time accepting rejection of their recommendations. They are skilled writers who know that what they have suggested will do a better job of reaching the client’s audience than what the client wants to use.

But if you cannot let go of your “superior” versions of clients’ material, if you cannot resist letting them know that they are rejecting some brilliant enhancements of their messages, you should not be in the ghostwriting business.

Over time, I have gradually brought along the client I mentioned above to the point where he uses the word “wordsmithing” to mean much, much more. In fact, for many of his articles, he gives me just a few bullet points, and I create the draft for him to review — almost the reverse of the process at the beginning of our relationship.

The result is that I provide more value to my client, and generate higher fees for this level of service. Taking the time to gradually educate my client and extend the services I provide has been good for his business … and good for mine.

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SneakyMedia are looking for Guest Authors

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Posted on 6th May 2011 by tdomf_e01d5 in internet |Uncategorized

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Usability: How to write for the Web

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Posted on 2nd May 2011 by tdomf_e01d5 in internet |Uncategorized

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Do You Study Before You Write?

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Posted on 1st May 2011 by Bogdan Petrovan in internet |Uncategorized

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When I first started freelancing, writing was not my path of choice. I thought to myself, “it’s a static, unattractive domain, which cannot give me the possibility to develop and grow into something better.”

Rather than write, I focused my attention on my primary skills (I work as a quality assurance specialist at a software company). But I soon found out that there weren’t too many jobs available for QA experts. So I decided to give writing a chance, first reluctantly, and then with more and more confidence.

Of course, I had to start from scratch. Besides my English skills, I had few assets that could help me in my newly discovered career path. Slowly, I built up that foundation, and as I gathered steam, I found it easier and easier to get good writing jobs. Without the courage (madness, luck, call it what you like) of stepping out of my comfort zone, I never would have learned that I can write pretty well and make some money doing it.

Which brings me to the point of this post. Writing blog posts, articles, creative pieces, and technical documentation is a great way of learning new things. Most of us are not fortunate enough to only cover subjects that we love or know well. From time to time, we have to step out of our comfort zone and study something new, so we can write about it.

New Things I’ve Learned from Writing

I’ve learned a lot of new things from freelancing as a writer.

For example, I wrote more than 25,000 words about Denver and the beautiful state of Colorado. I’ve never been there, but I did my best to research all things related to the Centennial state, from the Denver Broncos football team, to the hundreds of microbreweries that make Colorado a hotspot on the maps of beer aficionados. I grew fond of this great American state, and I dream of actually visiting it one day.

Well, you may say–how does knowing stuff about Colorado help you in your day to day life? It doesn’t. But other things I’ve learned while writing do have added value.

Another example of something I’ve learned about is real estate. I’ve read entire books on the subject, blogs and forum posts, just to be able to offer competent advice on anything related to real estate. I now know what a lease-to-buy contract is, how to conduct due diligence before making a deal with someone, and how to spot the best targets for house flips.

Another gig landed me a business proposal, which who knows, I just might accept. It’s about offering training for a wildly popular enterprise planning software. Yes, I had to learn about that before writing about it too, and it was one of the toughest things I ever had to study.

On the more prosaic side, I also know how to fix nicks and scratches on old furniture (tip–crayons!), how to pick the right plants for my north-facing living room and even how to calibrate lathes. I know, glamorous.

And there are the things that give me headaches just when I think about them. You never know what writer’s block is until you have to write 12,000 words worth of product descriptions about dragon figurines, Tinker Bell dolls and military themed watches.

The Importance of Research in Freelance Writing

Some consider that people like me, namely freelancers paid to write about subjects they don’t really master, spoil the internet, and… pretty much everything. It’s the raging debate on shallow content and fluff writing.

In fact, I agree with them. I stay away from writing fluff as much as possible, and only write about subjects that I have learned about, if not mastered. This is why I invested so much time into studying real estate and apartment plants. Unfortunately, not everyone thinks is worth to sacrifice precious time to learn something, before churning out the paid-per-word article. And others just don’t care.

When I draw the bottom line, I look with pride at all the new things that I learned as a freelance writer. Every subject I write about improves my knowledge, my culture even, and makes me more prepared to handle challenges. Maybe someday, a writing gig will be the key to the next shift in my career.

Your Turn

I bet I am not the only one who feels this way. Most of you probably have to study something before writing about it.

Let me know what interesting stuff you learned from your freelance writing jobs. Do you think that it’s worth it to sacrifice time and energy to study a certain subject for your writing job? Is writing a good way of improving one’s perspective on life?

Working as a freelance writer has been great for me. In the last year, I grew both personally and professionally, and today I feel more confident than ever that I can make it as a freelancer. How about you?

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